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#87757 - 10/09/05 11:27 AM
perception coming from female
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Opionions Please: I was thinking of doing something like BuyingDenver's tag line: "If you are interested in buying or selling in the Denver area, I would love to serve you!" Coming from a FEMALE, how does,"...I would love to SERVE you!" sound?" Is it something that a GUY can get away with better than a female? Is there another/better way to say the same thing? Thanks for your input. Coronado
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#87759 - 10/09/05 01:39 PM
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I don't like the idea of "serving" anyone, so I think it makes you sound like a weak person. It's not something I'd consciously think, but it does come across that way.
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#87760 - 10/09/05 03:32 PM
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Registered: 04/27/04
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Loc: Pittsburgh PA
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Dee,
There's a plumbing company we have to use for ordering dye tests in our area. When you call, the female receptionist answers "Hello, how can I make you smile today?"
Talk about a loaded question.
For your tagline, how about using "I would love to assist you." or something to that effect?
Mike
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#87761 - 10/09/05 08:29 PM
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I think it's up to the person on how lewd they want to be. I wouldn't think of anything negative with these taglines except they use powerless language.
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#87762 - 10/09/05 09:49 PM
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Originally posted by Ben34105: I think every female should have that saying! 
Hmm.. I think I just answered your question. ROFLMAO
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#87763 - 10/09/05 11:50 PM
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Registered: 08/17/05
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Loc: Birmingham, Alabama
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Hey buying all houses,
How about, "If you are interested in buying or selling in the San Diego area, I welcome the opportunity to be of service" ?
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George W. Jackson, IV
Associate Broker, SFR
Keller Williams Realty
"Providing A Higher Level of Professional Service"
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#87764 - 10/10/05 07:25 AM
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Rising Realtor "If you are interested in buying or selling in the San Diego are, I welcome the opportunity to be of service" ? Thanks for your suggestion. I like your tag line...it's shorter!
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#87765 - 10/10/05 07:30 AM
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Ben34105: [QB] I think every female should have that saying! Ben, I Think it should be a law!.... I think it's in the constitution 
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